this was also amazing. You've great talent as an author. I seriously can relate to this one (gasp, surprise surprise) and you expressed it all wonderfully. Write forever

E, sad dark poem!! ::runs away:: I'm trying to stay -happy-. ^_~
Anywayz, great poem! The flow was good and it was plainly interesting to read. Hehehe.
By the way...::looks around sneakily and bites you:: SMILE! You got rabies!
^_~ I'm such a Baka but I'm also the all mighty GGP (goody goody psycho) ^_~
Have a good day and keep writing!
~ Little Dog Muse

wow that was deep. anyway i thought it was really sad you should write a happy poem. :) SMILE it contagious and it makes peolple wonder what yoiur thinking but thats not why you sho9uld write something happy ne nm just ignore me everone else does lol

Nice piece, it flows well and the imagery is strong. It's well written and interesting to read.
-nix-