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amethystdawn 2004-11-25 . chapter 1
okie... scary thing happened. review window said that "page can not be found." after i typed my long review for you. e... Anyway, if it's not there, I'll just have to give you something less fantastic. I can't repeat myself completely.

Review:I must have been gone for a really long time... I actually don't remember reading this! *gasp in horror* Someone must have brainwashed me! Okay, I'll stop. This is getting more stupid by the minute. What I do remember is the "Yay-Boo" part, surprisingly. The oddest things stick to me. Anyway, great poem! I love it, especially the first stanza. For some strange reason, I suddenly got sucked into the girl's world... All that sadness, dashed hopes and desperation... Great job. Keep writing!
amethystdawn 2004-07-03 . chapter 1
I will make you happy! ^_^
Love is a puzzle you know. But it's not only always one-sided. Another great job done once again. You never cease to amaze me. Where do you come up with these things? ;)
OryssaV 2004-04-07 . chapter 1
I need to steal your line so here it goes "BO" how could you say these things about your poem... ahem, I quote "This poem annoys me slightly after the first stanza."
For those that want to "slap" you I should say this... it is very, VERY clever poem.
I just love every last line of the stanzas! And the most I love this
"So won't you walk with me?"
It is so tragic... and so moving. *wipes the tears* like it is very numbing. Whoever is the speaker in this poem is just so much into it that it creates the image of a nymph in my head... don't ask why cause I dunno.
Still, this is about love and I must congragulate you. You didn't make it sappy like millions out there, and it shows you have talent. Keep it going!!
Shade2 2004-04-04 . chapter 1
Yay and boo? *raises eyebrow* Hmm, the Italians aren't good for much (other than pasta and Italian fencing), but this was pretty. Good job. Moscow really sucks, btw, in case you should like to know. But yes, this was a pretty poem. *look, a review!* Yay indeed . . .
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