"to cry when they say that 'to cry is to be weak' is to be strong."

gorgeous.

Whoa. This is one of the best pieces I have ever read. It's so intelligent and insightful. It's like a small child bombarding the mind with life's questions, but not giving anyone a chance to answer because that child knows everything; the secret to life and the world. How everything is... You're a true talent among writers.

interesting, and very dizzyfying in its language, good flow, and different, like it, a lil too mushed in together for my tastes, maybe bigger font would be better for my head...anywayz, love the one line sentences, esp since they're all out there like that, really made it stronger...its emotional..yet, something about the tone made it very emotionally distant or just insane..like that, cause its a hard emotion to get across in writing but you seemed to pull it off very well, is everyone allergic to grass? and the waste high in the ocean parts are my favorites i think, i got really vivid mental images from those, muchly nice, anywayz, nicely done

Your poems are so distinct and unique, each one has a signifying voice. You're talented, and this poem itself was very good.