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| Twilight Starr 2007-09-28 ch 1,  | abuseGreat poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a wonderful day. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Ravenspear 2004-04-04 ch 1, | abuseNice. :) |
| mazasuki 2004-04-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, I like it! The repetition is used very well here and I like how the end goes witht the repetition, but it's not the same verse (if you get that...). Touching poem, keep it up! ~Maz |
| rd-kittykat 2004-04-03 ch 1, | abuseA really depressing yet touching poem. I like your style of writing poetry. |
| Amaya Windsong 2004-04-03 ch 1, | abuseoh! i lubb it! YAY. you should write more often! WAHO. |Rikku| |