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Reviews For: Sunset

Change-Of-Heart
2004-04-10
ch 1,
abuseAW! That was sweet. ^_^
eighteen hundred
2004-04-03
ch 1,
abuseAw, that was so sweet!! Like what he said, and she said, and what he did, and, well, it was sweet^_^
(I just woke up, I can't review properly, sorry)
Rose of Sharon
2004-04-03
ch 1,
abuseI can really feel a connection between these two characters -- it's powerful. Watch out for cliches, like the sun setting 'in all its splendor.' Great job!
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