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| Change-Of-Heart 2004-04-10 ch 1,  | abuseAW! That was sweet. ^_^ |
| eighteen hundred 2004-04-03 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was so sweet!! Like what he said, and she said, and what he did, and, well, it was sweet^_^ (I just woke up, I can't review properly, sorry) |
| Rose of Sharon 2004-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI can really feel a connection between these two characters -- it's powerful. Watch out for cliches, like the sun setting 'in all its splendor.' Great job! |