But I like fags...lol, anyway, that is some major case of brainwashing I'd say. Wow, sounds like a girl I knew...

so scary dat its true but d idea 2 put d hatred and cruel opinions of many thru d eyes of a liitle innocent girl well it just shows how fucked up d world actually has bcum! iv said it b4 and ill say it again u r so incredibly talented! x

absolutely brilliant!

Very good im glad to be an atheist

Love the feeling it evokes. Sadness and the girl's hate. (Passed down like a family recipie.) Nice, nice, love the nursery rhymish feel.
-Jessica

Again, a piece that protests without lifting a finger. Beautiful, powerful, and shocking enough to piss the right-wingers off. I like the blatant honesty of it very much.

Oh, aren't little kids cute when they've been brainwashed by the Church? Heh. Oh, well. I was a brainwashed little kid. I grew out of it. Some do, some don't. I guess everyone is brainwashed until they realize they have to start thinking for themselves, then they might keep their beliefs because they find them good, or they might reject them. Wow, that was a long review. Anyway, I really like the poem. Gets your point across very nicely. I'm recommending this to a friend.

OMG! So many reviews *happy authoress dance*
I'm so glad you all liked it. Of course I'd be more glad if my poor little girl didn't realy exist all over the world... *le sigh*

Very good. Deep too. That is really how ALL religions are.

I love thins poem, I think that it's quite true to most religons.

ha thats beautiful!
Nat

It's scary 'cause it's true. Nice work - sounds just like how a little kid would talk when regurgitating what she hears her elders go on about.

wow, very powerful. its amazing how true today that is. simply said, hugely meaningful.

nice. you did well at capturing an all-too-true phemomenon

Wow... It amazes me that someone who claims to know God would teach their child such evil stuff. If a parent is giving that messed up version of what God is like, then I'm very worried.I'm a Christian but often find myself having to see people like the little girl and it scares me because God does not tell us to believe those things. I really liked your poem. God bless.