Aw... That was sweet and sad and utterly cute. Loved it.

Ah...sweet

Aw... that was so adorable! I wish love in general was always like that... -

I like it. (the ending is funny)

mebe you could add in more about the times just before the wedding

oh, i love al your little short fics!

aw! this is so cute. i love it! D

Jesus, this is BEAU-tiful. It's really sweet. I love it! I like how you switch between present and past. I'm gonna add it to my faves :d
Pls check out my work :D
HeavenLeigh xx

I'm loving all your stories.. short or long.. we don't get to write that many stories at school. Well, we did when I was in year 8 and 9, but not anymore (I'm in yr 11) it's all essays, essays and more essays.
In Year 9, I ended up going over the limit and had to edit the ending to make it shorter.. (it was still 10 wrds over the limit). My teacher then said that I should've made the ending longer since it looked rushed -.-; *sigh* but I got a good mark for it, so I was happy anyway. ) That's my useless little story for the day. Look forward to reading more

I liked this a lot. You are very talented. By chance, have you read The Bride, by Julie Garwood? I ask this becaue Alec Kincaid is her main character... and he is a Scottish Warlord. Just wondering.

Aww...this is such an adorable little fic! I'm loving it!

this story was sweet! and nice! oh so nice!
i love ur short stories... they r THE BEST! ive read each one more times than i can count...
write more short stories soon, they r the best!

That's so cute! Getting soft on me?...That's not a bad thing! Don't go making a sequel where alec and madison get slaughtered by a deranged mass murderer or anything. Anyway, Davis will probably love it as usual. ) Now if only i could begin mine and how the hell am i gonna write a story shorter than yours! *sigh* Loved yours though, very sweet. )

aw, "don't cry", i feel like crying, that was so sweet. Aw man oh man u better get 100% on it. I don't think she will notice 7 pages, probably she will be feeling sorry for crying over the paper. It so sweet man. You are so the opposite. Great story man. Feel free to put up all ur writer craft stories on the site.

Oh! what a sweet ending :). You did such a great job again. I just love everything you write.. keep it up :)