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Les Otho 2005-01-12 . chapter 1
Perhaps I have completely missed the point, but when you say "Do unto others as you will/Have them do unto you" (a choice of quotation that seems out of kilter with the rest of the decidedly modern tone) how does that in any way justify your ignoring this person? Surely the only right course of action for the final stanza is for you to demonstrate your moral superiority by building a bridge to this person, however hateful they might be?
pudding wings 2004-04-15 . chapter 1
very good poem, very strong, i believe in what you say.
Soulshifter 2004-04-06 . chapter 1
hmm... not what i expected from the title... but good
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