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| Writer in the Shadows 2004-06-22 ch 1,   | A few of the times you wrote 'your' when you really should have just written 'you'. Either that, or it's just because I'm half-asleep. Overall, I think you did a decent job with capturing the reader's emotions with this piece. |
| tawnyfawn 2004-04-03 ch 1, | Really really sad and very deep. Well written. Really sad... Keep up the good writing. from fawny |
| ZiggyGurl 2004-04-03 ch 1, | This was sort of a reverse of one of your others. I can't remember what it was called. But anyway, this one was great too. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-04-03 ch 1, | hum, nice! |