I like this story a bit. It sort of reminds me of my second favorite Tom Clancy Novel "Clear and Present Danger" ("Debt of Honor" is my favorite) and I see that this story is old. The writing style on it isn't exactly what builds this story together. But most of all, thank you for reviewing Jungle Storm. I have to wait until January until my email is up and then me and Sasuke Kun will work on it if he agrees and if it does good enough (Review wise).

But I'll see you around, Jungle Storm will soon be re-written into a much longer story nown as "Special Tactics Force."

cool story, plot and everything, although the verticalness of it made a bit hard to read.
very cool

What's up, Jason?
For somebody who hasn't spoken the English language for the entirety of his life, you actually write pretty well. Of course, there are grammatical errors, but surprisingly, I could read past most of them, with the exception of one-tense. My piece of advice is to write in the past tense, like "he said, she said" instead of "he says she says." It's what they DID, not what they're doing. Okay, I'm done ranting about grammar. :D
The storyline seems intense. We see two CI Agents who will be a part of the task force. Perhaps they will be romantically involved? It does remininsce Clear and Present Danger a lot, but who I am to speak? I hope you update this soon, and if you need help with grammar or the format of the story, just send me an e-mail.

I don't know if you remember me but you rated a story of mine. I read your story. It was good. Very descriptive of both places and people. Keep writing!

Very nice. When reading it, I thought of Tom Clancy, and Harrison Ford. The plot is vaguely reminicent of that type of Spy-genre, which I enjoy.
So definately keep up the good work, it's excellent so far.

Nice action going here. The strange vertical format made it kind of hard to read, but that doesn't detract from the story.

Solid. I have trouble following political stuff, but the action was solid and I enjoyed it. Format is screwy, but who cares?

Good. Very good. I'm interested. Keep it up.

Interesting, I don't read that many story based on terrorism, but this is good, the only small thing I noticed was that the whole thing went vertical. Aside from that, this is really good.