 Jez-Arinn 2004-05-28 . chapter 1wow... in three short lines we have both empathy and analogy. ^^
a genius piece!
~jez-arinn~
(hearts should not be broken~) ** |
 Shandris 2004-04-08 . chapter 1That's a great haiku!! |
 imxnotxyourxstar 2004-04-05 . chapter 1I liked this, the idea of the broken window symbolizing a broken heart was good. Nice job!
~Lsay312 |
 Lina Inverse 2004-04-04 . chapter 1I like the second line. I can picture the broken windows shattering very well |
 Myra Kilgore 2004-04-04 . chapter 1aw!...I know what you're trying to say in this...I've felt the same from time to time. This is great! Keep Writing!--KS |