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Reviews For: Broken Hearted
Jez-Arinn 2004-05-28 . chapter 1
wow... in three short lines we have both empathy and analogy. ^^
a genius piece!
~jez-arinn~
(hearts should not be broken~) **
Shandris 2004-04-08 . chapter 1
That's a great haiku!!
imxnotxyourxstar 2004-04-05 . chapter 1
I liked this, the idea of the broken window symbolizing a broken heart was good. Nice job!
~Lsay312
Lina Inverse 2004-04-04 . chapter 1
I like the second line. I can picture the broken windows shattering very well
Myra Kilgore 2004-04-04 . chapter 1
aw!...I know what you're trying to say in this...I've felt the same from time to time. This is great! Keep Writing!--KS
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