this is really neat- i like the suspense at the beginning, very cool
review me wen you get a chance, thanx!

Brilliant, well done. It's lovely, you're a fantastic author!! I thought you weren't writing online anymore, but I'm really pleased to see you are. Good one, that was brilliant!!

This was a really original idea, and I really appreciate it when people can spell...all of the words you used flowed with the idea of the water, made the story entrancing. I loved it.