wow, this was a beautiful poem! i'm adding it to my favorites

you are so
talented- how do you think of the discriptions?
anyway- another great poem!
i hope she does.(think of you i mean...)

Very good. Again, the end is powerful.

Sunflower, your poems are always so beautiful and insightful. The metaphors are used skillfully, I must applaud you for that. The ending was good, but it didn't quite hit the spot like some of your other poems did. Overall, very nice, keep up the good work.

Simple I say but beautifully written. It flows in a unique way ) I like it.
Jenna xx

Awesome metephores:
"And sometimes I feel like a forgotten waterfall,
Deep in the woods where the deer forget to roam,
Singing with all my might to the silence of pristine
Darkness..."
Awesome poem in general. Good stanzas, amazing metephores. The only thing it's missing is a rythem (which doesn't really matter because the poem is just plain great!). I'm sorry but there are just no words to explain the beautifulness of this poem.