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| broken223 2005-05-09 ch 1,  | abusewow...wow...wow...it is amazing!! i love it! the whole poem is captivating. |
| lovelikeamixtape 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Beautiful. I love it. |
| godsgurl 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abuseWow, that is so waesome. i really loved it. i especially loved the transitions between the personifications. Really, really good. |
| Quid 2005-02-08 ch 1, | abuseThat's beautiful, I loved the imagery, and the feelings behind it. |
| Twilit Exaggerance 2005-01-07 ch 1, | abuseLove this, Sunflower. This is amazing. Probably here that all the time, but one more won't hurt! |
| graffiti-skies 2004-08-21 ch 1, | abusewow, this was amazing! luved the way everything flowed together |
| the-sapphirelion 2004-08-02 ch 1, | abuseWow... just wow. |
| AboveTheSalt 2004-07-28 ch 1, | abuseoh my god. This is truly, TRULY beautiful. i absolutley love the rhythm and repition, it flows oh-so-well. The imagery, the beauty, the feelings.. it's too much. I really love this with all my heart and it is going immediately to my favorites. Bravo on creating a poem that expresses your inner self so eloquently. :) :) :) |
| catseyeview 2004-07-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful,I love your first stanza where you compare yourself to a ball of fire, a star, yet something seen as a speck by others. The velvet black hands of God is such a beautiful image. Nice Pen Name also. Nice philosophy to go by. |
| Lunar Eclipse1 2004-06-12 ch 1, | abuseBreathless... that's what I am right now... your poem is amazing... |
| sciagraphus 2004-05-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is cool! It reads almost like a song.:) |
| Aureya of Chocolate 2004-04-23 ch 1, | abuseoh oh oh oh thats so cool! i really really liked that one this line's my favourite: "For I am the rain... I must fall to become" how how cool :) lotsa luv, jazzo |
| cocolori 2004-04-20 ch 1, | abuseVery good!! I really liked it. The first stanza with the metaphor about being a star but only seen from millions of miles away was truly wonderful. This might work as a song - don't know if that was the intention or not. Keep scribbling! |
| Damaged 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuseYou have no idea how much this poem meant to me and how it just helped. Thank you for writing this and sharing it here at fictionpress!! You have INCREDIBLE talent that just took my breath away. Thank you for reading and reviewing my essay "What Do People See?". I thank you for your honesty and critisism, and I do agree on how you said "I don't want my friends to be pretty, I want them to be honest"..etc. I wasn't trying to make it seem like all I want are pretty friends, because just like you said, they tend to be fake and "superfictial." And yeah, I do realize my mistake of not going "beneath the skin". I had all intentions of doing that, but I must've forgotten while I was writing. I'll edit that and edit it - thank you for pointing that out! Once again, thank you for reading my essay and being so honest and open! It means a bunch to me! And keep writing! I love your talent! I'll have to read more!! ^_^ ~Damaged |
| AntiPleasure 2004-04-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, not bad. I like! ^_^ I especially liked the second line "A huge burning ball of fire" heh that's the 'metaphor' I usually use for stars, mm hm. Good imagery. Keep up the fab work. Jenna xx |