I loved it! This is my favourite poem (so far!) of yours. You made one spelling mistake: 'So it is I to say toady'. But it was excellent!

Another one that ends with "forever"... ^__^ Like I said, mystical. Though this one is much more painful and grittier. Your emotion in this comes across well.

definately captures the moment. I like how you took the title from the last word of the last three lines. Written very well (like all of the rest of your pieces =P) one spelling error.. but other than that it was a great poem. =D

*SW*

Thank you for your review on 'Worlds' I'm glad you liked it =) ty ty ty!! =D

This struck a chord with me as it pretty much sums up my mood at the moment.
I like your choice of words.