Very to the point! Really brings out the effect of the words, when I read it, it makes me think of my past! Graet use of vocab and imagery! Also thanx for reviewing my "Why Can't This World Be?"

i simply love your vocabulary and word chocies. you seem to have a grasp upon the imapact your writing can have just by using certain words and that really adds to an already great poem.

This is incredible. A fantastic portrayal of old age, with nothing of entertainment but to relive the past. Wow. This is just chock-ful of vivid pictures. Very very good.

Very dark. It is hm.. i don't know how to explain =/. I liked it... exspecially the last line... kinda reminded me of Poe with the 'never more' =).

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Thank you for all of your reviews! I'm going to go read the update of 'Immoral Death'!!

Lovely. Keep writing!

Beautiful.. well done. Good job.