i always have and always will love you..stop getting all confuzed...lol

Well thought out and written
I prefer other styles of poetry..
I have tried to use this style
never successfully and never satisfied with it.

ooh- heart breaking.
and honest.
but sparse-- while it has a really brutal effect maybe giving the reader more information will make for a smoother read--
however i really enjoyed it. :)
thumbs up.