o, pretty, very hopeful and sweet yet with a certian dark element to it that i love, well written and with good imagery, i love your language in this as well, its very careful and with strong vocabulary, beautifully done

Incredible stuff, as always. I especially like the lines,
"Summoning a tempest to create the Netherworld,
Preparing to distort the beauty you hold"
Awesome. You are the master. The last lines really pull it to a great closure. Great job, keep it up!

Great poem. The last stanza is what really captured me. good job.