m...maybe its about heaven, as a mother figure pehaps. exquisite.

Hm..I'd say this is good BUT you should include the title.

well, at first I thought it was a sort of "entering death" dream. But as the poem continued, more and more of it seemed to deal with life, real life. And the pain that comes with it of course. And then..."for the last time," that was pretty powerful. She's leaving "dreamworld" forever then? Or is it life?

hm i liked the last line. It is different but i dunno i like it. Paints a nice picture =)

*Silent Writer*

Thank you or you review on "Sweet Sin"

It's a lovely poem... Wow. Its really sweet, very creative and i think that it reminds me of something. Oh well, never mind. *lost in thought* ^-^

Very sweet!

I really like this poem! I like all of yours though seeing as you reviewed mine I figure I should review yours too ^_^ Keep on writing!

That's brilliant...That's great! ^.^

aww. very sweet... makes one feel loved by just reading it. :) nice.