This is really interesting...HA, I TOLD you I would review some of your stuff! lol you know what I mean...anyway, I don't know if this was her house, or whatever it meant to her, but no matter what the message behind this is, it's very intriguing, and I could definitely read it several times over. I really liked these two lines:"She proceeded through the room as one might an ancient cathedral, paying homage to a holy and surreal God with power unimaginable."and"Leaping over brambles and stones the girl disappeared into the forest, laughing at the shadows."It's beautiful, in a faded, sad way (you know what I mean)...it's almost like she's a ghost who disappears with her own memories of the place. Very, very intriguing the more I think about it, nice work my friend!