Yikes! Creepy...but good! Hmm, I assume the watchers in here are different from the one in Watcher? heh. Anyway...yikes. I wouldn’t want to be burned. Talk about a masochism. Yah, anyway, good job!!

Wow,I can see talent emmitted in this poem from the combustion of the blue flames, this is fantastic. The imagery is beautiful, it took me almost a full 11 mintues to read this poem. I was lost in wanderings so many times I almost forgot to continue to read. I love the progression through this poem, it is very well done. I assume that this is releated to one of your stories and reading it would help me understand how the subject got to this position. I am very impressed that no pain was felt by the subject, that would be out of keeping of the tone. Many less practised writers would have included it in such a poem. Great finish, it is well lead up to and is not an anti-climax. The layout and formatting is good, it is very readable and appealing to look at, as well as being a joy to read. The short lines give good pace contrasted with longer ones, you vary the tempo well to keep the reader interested and involved. All that shows talent and needs practise, you obviously have both. Well done here and good luck in all your work.
Nine Iron

*sings slowly* candles are for burning candles are for fun... i'm high, remember?
anyhoo... ebony stake? as in our friend ebony?
EBONY STEAK! I'm turning cannabalistic XD

Amazing! I can really feel for this piece and appreciate it having been written! Thank you. The rhythm is superb, as the choice of alternation, ect. Nice work!

Very good with some wonderful imaginary.