I added you to my fave authors list... I love a lot of your work. This piece however, I have to say I do not typically care for the rhyme scheme. A little redundent. As for the rest of it, wonderful imagery. I like the topic and the manner in which it is portrayed. Keep writing!

*whistles and claps* I've been there before. Kinda... Obviously I'm not dead yet. But you did a beautiful job, I loved the rhyme.
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