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| chochang913 2004-04-06 ch 1,  | abuseOnce again, awesome imagery. Reminds me of a phrase from an Evanescence song (Going Under) "I'm falling forever." Also the name of my favorite Evanescence website (falling-forever.com). Gah, why do I always ramble?!? Forgive me, I'm sure it's annoying as hell. As said, great imagery. chochang913 |
| tranCendenZ 2004-04-05 ch 1, | abuse"Into the endless night Of darkness." is a bit redundant...obviously it is dark if there is endless night..but other than that this poem well written and creative |