Once again, awesome imagery. Reminds me of a phrase from an Evanescence song (Going Under) "I'm falling forever." Also the name of my favorite Evanescence website (falling-forever.com). Gah, why do I always ramble?!? Forgive me, I'm sure it's annoying as hell. As said, great imagery.
chochang913

"Into the endless night
Of darkness." is a bit redundant...obviously it is dark if there is endless night..but other than that this poem well written and creative