Reviews for Haiku collection: Sorrow
Myriah 6/22/05 . chapter 9
These are all really good, the regret and bitterness are well-conveyed. Awesome. Especially liked #7.
Nobody-n-Particular 6/20/05 . chapter 9
Nice imagery.
A-Prototypical-Poet 6/20/05 . chapter 9
I like this one...it's really creative.
Christine - CRW 6/20/05 . chapter 9
they do not know why, says so much...for so little words so much depth and meaning.
ygg 6/20/05 . chapter 9
Wow what a great poem! Very deep yet uncomfortable in some way.. Great job!
angelus . noir 6/20/05 . chapter 9
bittersweet, unbidden emotion. I loved it, beautiful work!* noelle
Nobody-n-Particular 6/20/05 . chapter 9
Words come unbidden, I like this.
HauntedMisery 6/20/05 . chapter 9
Awesome work on this!
citrus scented 6/20/05 . chapter 9
relatable, powerful haiku. nice one.
myno 6/20/05 . chapter 9
i know the feeling all too well. i've tried to express that emotion in poems about my own selfharm, which was triggered by abuse, with the line "they are not aware of the bruises, because only the scars survive." Meaning, they don't know the reason for the selfharm, only that there is selfharm. It's important to look for the reason... Anyway, i don't know how much sense i'm making, excellent haiku.
Haunted-dreams05 6/20/05 . chapter 9
I can understand and relate to this. Vey good poem. Nicely written.
marshbar960 6/20/05 . chapter 9
very creepy yet i can totally relate. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
Ziranyan Calacirya 6/20/05 . chapter 9
the best thing about the things u write, is that even though they are short, they have powerful meaning
Slowly Sinking 6/20/05 . chapter 9
Great work, the opening's kinda creepy but really powerful. Love this piece.
Wing Chant 1/13/05 . chapter 1
You've got away with words! Wowness! *ish open jawed with amazment* Cool!
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