Once again so much emotion express in just six lines.. Its amazing i dont know how you do it.

Beautifully written. A word to the wise When love don't love you, sometime u have to display a deeper love by letting love go.
Keep up the good work
TTFN

Yea you told her alot she never listened...

Aw, don't you just hate it when you tell your loved one that you won't ever let go and they don't believe there isn't anything they could do to ever push you away?...I'm trying to think... I have a poem about this, but I can't think of the name of it to save my life...I don't know. Well anyways, this is really good! I love it!
LiL Angel with Wings
Dreamer to Fly

Now I really like this. If you added more words it could be used as a song. Wonderfully written. This is really good. TTFN.