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| far-away-dreamer 2004-04-05 ch 1,  | abuseI totally feel for you. Same thing's been happening to me. And, I know what you mean by trying to make you the 'daughter of every mother's dreams'. Mine has been that way lately...or something pretty close. |
| ALK214 2004-04-05 ch 1, | abuseOK... this poem was OK. It's nothing I haven't already seem sh*tloads of, but the rhyme scheme was better-than-average, and the whole idea of running is unique. Keep writing -- but put your head behind your emotions, every once in a while. |
| Aylae 2004-04-05 ch 1, | abusewow, i can associate, don't run. She may mean the best. I have tried. don't give up. be who u are. |
| Farewell-Twilight 2004-04-05 ch 1, | abusewow, very well written and you've managed to get the feelings right down to the last detail congrats! ~*Farewell~Twilight*~ |