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Reviews For: The Good Girl
CoolBeans18s 2004-05-17 . chapter 1
Wow... this is a very deep piece. The end ('good girls are never late for class...') was especially powerful. Very well written. Its so full of emotion!
~ CoolBeans18s
Stokd 2004-04-15 . chapter 1
Wow! That's really good! Keep adding onto the story if you can.
katmonkey 2004-04-05 . chapter 1
Wow, powerful. I love it and the last line 'good girls are never late for class' is and excellent way to end it.
Well done for writing a brilliant short story :)
*lime-girl*
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