Wow... this is a very deep piece. The end ('good girls are never late for class...') was especially powerful. Very well written. Its so full of emotion!
~ CoolBeans18s

Wow! That's really good! Keep adding onto the story if you can.

Wow, powerful. I love it and the last line 'good girls are never late for class' is and excellent way to end it.
Well done for writing a brilliant short story :)
*lime-girl*