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| CoolBeans18s 2004-05-17 ch 1,   | Wow... this is a very deep piece. The end ('good girls are never late for class...') was especially powerful. Very well written. Its so full of emotion! ~ CoolBeans18s |
| Stokd 2004-04-15 ch 1, | Wow! That's really good! Keep adding onto the story if you can. |
| katmonkey 2004-04-05 ch 1, | Wow, powerful. I love it and the last line 'good girls are never late for class' is and excellent way to end it. Well done for writing a brilliant short story :) *lime-girl* |