 Summerkins 2004-04-23 . chapter 1hugs cariee! you better not have done ANYTHING with ANYONE! or i'll get mad...lolol |
 faerie-gumdrops 2004-04-13 . chapter 1I like it, and the advice it gives. So true! x Faerie |
 Fallen Too Far 2004-04-13 . chapter 1message coming in loud and clear, really strong emotions just flowing out of this 'so-called poem' real writing from the heart. |
 Aylae 2004-04-12 . chapter 1wow. i can understand...good advice, its a shame how people realise in a hard way, but we all have to learn. good poem |
 xzerinieah 2004-04-12 . chapter 1You've expressed the message clearly: for that, congratulations. |
 marabelle 2004-04-08 . chapter 1woah: very heatfelt and im glad your fine!
sarah wild |
 A Chroi 2004-04-06 . chapter 1This is wonderful. It says exactly what you wanted it to, I think. Are you sure you're fine, though? I know you don't know me, but I have this little tendency to worry about most everything. Saying you're fine is often a mask; just don't be afraid to talk to anyone, all right? And that's my pop-pyschobabble/fortune cookie bit for today. This poem says everything about waiting that it needs to; it's everything your Health teachers ever told you, except I think people would be inclined to listen to this. Thank you for posting it; I think you can affect a lot of people with your work. |