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Tenshi-no-Aku 2007-10-13 ch 1,	That gave me chills. I love it. The thing is, it's possible, after all, the winners write history not the losers.
La18 2005-07-24 ch 1,	Very... interesting... and inspiring. I love it. You wrote it beautifully. XD
bibble 2005-05-15 ch 1,	wow. completely and utterly. i'm speechless. wow. that was... probally one of the most moving short stories i've ever read. wow. i'm still floored. shocked and amazed. your talent is amazing! did i mention wow? there's always something in you that always symphsizes with the "evil" one. something in you that roots for the bad side. (even though they never win)
sycoticatalyst 2005-05-09 ch 1,	Heh... The bit about it looking as if an eagle had been eating his liver... Made me smile. Not a good happy smile, really, but an allusionary smile, cause of whatshisname, Prometheus. Heh. I sent this link to a friend of mine, who has odd dreams bout this stuff, and he liked it. Just thought I'd let you know. Anyhow, now you've given me a bunny, and I must write it at some point. Hmm. I suck at writing though, so bleh.
[poka] 2005-05-03 ch 1,	o.O that's all i can say. I am speechless...
poetic abortion 2005-04-29 ch 1,	I love it. Evn though this has a negative out look toward the Christian/Catholic religion. (I happen to be Catholic by blood.) I still rather enjoyed this, I'm decently open minded and gave this a shot because it sounded interesting. ^__^ I am really pleased I did, this is simply fantastic! The plot holds so much brillance in its depths and I love how you evoke so many emotions into your writing leaves me stunned, and how you describe them ... my God, I have never been so captivated by a story negative to my own religion. I love it! The ending ia fantastic and the whole thing just reeks (rather nicely, rose sented) of brillance. How you portrayed them ... is so tragic and believable ... adds to favorites lists ^_^ !~* Noelle *~!
Aleta-Vera 2005-04-27 ch 1,	Oh I hope you're happy. I just spent the last TWO hours coming up with a name, signing up, and writing my profile, just so I could review this wonderful, inspiring, kicks-my-fanfiction-on-it's-**-backwards, story. This very well might be one of the greatest stories I've ever read. Ever. You really should think of trying to write a novel. I'm dead serious. I'm not some hyperactive fan-girl who chants 'OMG!', I really think you could write books. As in plural. Not to insult those who do ingest Mountain-Dew, chant 'OMG!', and suggested you write one. Because I myself have been known to partake of that pastime on occasion. I also am currently reading Fallen, which has to be the um, second greatest fanfiction ever. (The first being Lamenations of a Starry-Eyed Twit by She's a Star, I highly reccomend it.) Wow, this getting obnoxiously long. Great Job, I wish I could write like this, Nicole (P.s. I'm ms.understood on FF.net, please, I'm begging, read one of my stories!)
Equida 2005-04-22 ch 1,	As usual, that was a brilliant piece of writing. I, myself, also an "unhealthy obsession" with religious literature, although my fascination is more with Greek Mythology. Kudos to you on your brilliance with words.
Zella-Isabelle 2005-03-27 ch 1,	im speechless! and for that reason ill type. i luv ur writing style and ur pov of things. everything ive read of urs is amazing and i cant wait to read more. u r a literary genius and an influence on my life. u should really consider publishing sumthin uve written. u absolutly must post more of the things uve written. its immpossible not to luv! xox ~Zella
Crown V-Lyn 2005-03-27 ch 1,	OMG! THAT WAS GREAT! ever since i started reading Fallen i thought u were lik a devout... devout sumthin to God but now i know ur athiest. wut is an athiest anyway? does that mean u believe in nothing or u believe that there is a higher power u just dont know wut it is? no, i think thats agnostic. i dunno. but i am at a loss for words now that ive read this. im really big on the god thing but i have always wonder bout requirments to b welcomed into grace. lik there r so many good people in this world but according to Gods law u must believe in him to live an eternity in Heaven. an that u must b baptised. lik a baby who has not been baptised is not allowed into Heaven? wut bout stillborns? i dunno. but lik ive said bfor u r the genius! so far ive luved everything ive read of urs. omg ive always thought that u were a literary gift from God and mayb u dont believe that but i do. i have to believe that there is a better place than Earth. and that is God and Heaven and everything good on this earth comes from God. well thats my belief. xoxoxo! ~my luv and respect always,Vicky ps. and i still say ur a gift from God.
Undying at Midsummer 2005-03-11 ch 1,	Totally loved this story! I am an atheist as well, so I'm not going to be lecuring you or anything (but why anyone would, the story's MARVY!) I seriously think you should try your hand at writing a book, you could so do it, I think. Well even if you don't, please download more of your works!~sarah~ps. I just realised that you might not be understanding english/nz words I might be using, if you're American. Sorry! lol. Just so you know, marvy means marvelous. Please write more
katie 2005-01-27 ch 1,	wow this story is amazing. i like how you've changed the perspectives and had god evil in all of this... wow it's, i've got no way to describe it... its absolutely amazing... you should ask your teachers how you can contact someone to see if they will publish your stories, because this is brilliant. [oh and btw, i'm morning-flower on fanfiction, i've read your fallen fic and it ROCKS!]
queenie.jones 2004-12-08 ch 1,	AMAZING! wow- this really is a very good story, i like the way that you can convince people [ok i mean me] that Lucifer was in fact the one in the right, and God was the one in the wrong. I am currently reading Fallen on fanfiction, your writing is really good, and please, don't just stop at 'End of Eden, please upload some more of your original work, so that we don't miss out, love nelly
MMM 2004-11-20 ch 1,	omg...im crying..that is so amazing, you really should put out more, because that is so touching
Tiffany&Co 2004-11-06 ch 1,	In case you were wondering, I reviewed your fanfiction story Fallen as well. Anyway, just wanted to pop in... interesting concept and interpretation. You definitely went to the other extreme as far as Christian beliefs go; I would have preferred a more human Lucifer and God, both less evil and less good, and a little more gray. Still, really nice descriptions, I could picture everything. You've got to read The Garden, I'm not sure by who, a little long, just came out, fantasy/fiction. It's another take on Eden and the devil, etc. It's got a lot in common with yours!

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