Wow... that was a really cool image. I saw that picture perfectly- I love the way you used colors in your imagery, it made it very real and vivid. And I know what you mean about poetry: you get this colossal idea, and you can almost hear those perfect words in your head, and you maybe get a few of them out before they slip away or warp into something different alltogether. Sigh. Those darn muses, they wont sit still...

Anyway, good work. I shall have to read more of your stuff now.

Beutiful...

The imagery... blinding... stunning... You really described everything astonishingly well. You chose your words beautifully, and brought an overall sense of peace among her death. Brilliant, brilliant write. I love it - favs.

Lovely imagery and playing of the colours. Brilliant work. Man! You're a great and awesome poet!

mwahaha. no more annoying part of your world voice. yay.

Wow, I could see it like a picture painted in my mind. Very nice imagery, soo sad :( Keep up the good work!

i disagree with you. that's an awesome poem. it's a really amazing description and overall amazing poem. awesome!

wow.. i wasnt expecting that alst line.. awesome imagery.. you have a great way of describing things