wow...really great

W-o-w. Awesome. -adds author and poem to favorites- Spectacular job.

I love the line "fragments of me dreams." and "find the light I seek". Great job.

This is very good. It has a lot of truth to it too.

That is extremely beautiful. Reminds me ever so slightly of a fan poem I wrote called "Cruciatus".

this is really sad, knowing where this ended up.. but I like the language.