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| modernrobinhood 2008-01-17 ch 8, anon. | abusewow..this story is great..it is so awesome and enjoy every minute..cant wait to find out how it ends |
| the*apocalypse*is*near 2005-11-10 ch 8,  | abuseOMG! Who is it? Her fiend? Noah? WHO? |
| random monkeys 2005-02-21 ch 8, anon. | abusei am loving the plot. The charaters have so much personality. Im hateing damien!! barsted sounds like what her dad would have been like before her mum was pregnate.i love the music influensing the story (i have a black fender, its my baby!!) cant wait for the next chapter. |
| Lady Cyann 2004-08-05 ch 5, | abuseKeep up the good work! :-) |
| Lady Cyann 2004-08-05 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter...write on! ~LC~ |
| Lady Cyann 2004-08-05 ch 1, | abuseGood start on a good story. Please continue, and keep up the good work! ~LC~ |
| darkpunkgoddess 2004-07-19 ch 8, | abuseI've been reading your lovely story from the very beginning, yes I know I'm a mean mean person for not reviewing sooner, but I'm also sometimes border lazy, so please forgive me:-). Well I just have to say that your story has been one of my favs since you started it and I even have it on my fav's list on this name and my old one as well. I love Serena and Damien and the smoldering chemistry that they seemingly have. So who's at the door, is it her rommie or possibly Noah; letting someone in unexpectadly on their dirty little secret? Whoever it is let us all know and update as soon as you can cause as I'm sure all of your other reviewers feel the same way as I do and I've gone into withdrawl without your kick ** story to entertain me so please keep a wayward girl like me happy. I'll give you a cookie of your choosing if you update real soon. Stars and moonbeams and all that lovely **. Ah, don't mind the weirdness that is me, it's all part of my non-existent charm ::grins::. Gotta go now and terrorize other people, hey a girl's gotta do something to keep herself occupied now doesn't she? Remember to update soon and that cookie's all yours. Peace. By the way sorry if this seems a tab bit confusing or for an misspelled words cause I don't have any time to revise or rather glance over my review before my defective comp decides to shut down on me for the...well let's just say that it's been quite a few times. ~Diana |
| brokeneyezO4 2004-07-01 ch 1, | abuseheyy!! great chapter..i relly enjoyed it...well im off to read som more `jenna` |
| natalie-b 2004-06-15 ch 8, | abusem... i wonder who it is... i think i like noah better though... come back soon! |
| iluvsweep 2004-06-09 ch 8, | abuseok, this is a really great story! who's at the door?? its probably bianaca, or noah, i hope her and noah get together! please update really soon!! |
| Lovjessejames69 2004-06-07 ch 1, | abuseOkay i need to know how this turns out -i got all flustered reading that last chapter and i want to know who opens the door! i love the way u wrote this-keep up the amazing work! |
| sweet-angel101 2004-06-07 ch 8, | abuseHm...my only guess is that it could only be Bianca or Noah...but most likely Bianca... Anyways...excellant chapter! |
| sweet-angel101 2004-06-03 ch 7, | abuseThe way you described Noah...oh yeah...hottie indeed. Anyways...hope to see more son! |
| fiona 2004-06-02 ch 7, anon. | abuseI'am a fan of Noah already! |
| Vivian Hyde 2004-05-18 ch 6, | abusewow, that was really good. *cries* Damien is a self centered two timing jerk! i can't believe he wants her and her best friend. Gr... You need to update soon! i need to know what happens. |