Woah, disturbingly fantabulous. (Yes, I know just used two non-words in conjuction with one another)... yeah, the image is powerful, the language is chilling and the blood described is beautiful. Me likes very muchly I think. *Adds to favourites*

i like the way u used the word twisted in the story, i realy like the way u presented the story. it puts an image in my head ... great job

:D Very pretty.
I love the ironic twist to the "little girl"'s personality.
Or doll, maybe...
I was going to write a poetry with the same "idea" though it wasn't of fairy tales. :) I'll post it if I finish.. ;
Anyways, great work! I love it!