Weird O_o... I like ^_^ dreammoods.com is a good site for dream ideas.

Ugh. . . that would be quite a nightmare. The imagery is still with me, and it's not pleasant at all. But that was the point, if I'm not mistaken, so this is a really poignant, effective piece.

Interesting story. "Damnit, it was in the bag!" that was a great line :)
The dream wasn't exactly what I expected and thought it needed a little more description. But that just made it more interesting and open to interpretation.