Oh wow this one was really good, Keep it Up! and thanks for the review

angsty.
that's it.
you're going in
my favourites.

good, yes really good. the short lines really work in your favour here. definetly a favourite of mine.
bien fait
sarah

Hey! you're never alone.
I'm always here, as always your poem touch my heart. Just so you'll know I will always treasure them. And by the way,
What did you mean by unfaithful Missy?
Love It 2 thumbs up.
TTFN

Nice rhythem. Make it just a little longer and you'd have yourself a great song. _

this is awesome you are so good and by saying so lil it seems to have a big message! I like it and i dont care that you visit my page and leave reviews i look twoards to it every day your opinion means alot to me! Thanx for reviewin me and as long as my poems are good ill keep postin em!

After reading this poem, I believe that it's about someone who had done something very wrong...and is forever punished for what they can never correct...
I like the storytelling.