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| John Stein 2004-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuse"A different sexuality doesn't make you a sinner." Sorry, but, coming from an agnostic, that doesnt mean much. |
| SpawnMeister666 2004-04-29 ch 1,  | abuseI like this. I like it a lot. And I agree with it totally. Wouldn't the world be a boring place if everyone followed the same belief system? Clearly it's only ignorance that makes people fear other religions, colours, creeds, sexuality, whatever. The sooner people learn to see through the exterior and into the person within, the better! Spawny |
| FuxedUpBarbie 2004-04-17 ch 1, | abusenice very nice. i feel excaty the same way. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2004-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI agree with you...am a Christian and all. It's a good poem. |
| TalieZ 2004-04-07 ch 1, | abuseThis, this, was a ranting. I liked it. Made me think of whinny teenagers, but thats beside the point. There are alot of people who think like this. I couldnt honestly believe in the whole " I’m not evil for rejecting your God.When I march through the rain and hear the red mud and feel the music of the waterand I find love -that’s more of a religion than anything you’ll ever know." That right there was powerful, but i wouldnt relate it to Religion. It seems more like a free moment of expression and life. I have alot of view on God and human nature. Out of everything, i liked how you voiced your thoughts without holding back anything, screamed and ranted. That right there was solid honesty of your feelings, and no one should critique that. |
| Aylae 2004-04-07 ch 1, | abusesigh...how very true our words are. good poem. i like it, well written! |
| mmoonsshiner 2004-04-06 ch 1, | abuseiam with you on this one.Different dosent make a person bad, but not everyone has the capacity to understand that. I like the theme but i think the poemas a whole could have been...better structured? im trying to figure what it is that i dont like but its not really comming. Any ways about ur review of my poem , you are absolute right about the mirror. Read "Mock my words for a clearer discription... couch to alter isnt one of my best. but thanks for the review and hopefully we will see more of each others work in the future.~Nat |