So I ended up reading another one of your stories. :) Again, cute. I think the writing drastically improved from beginning to end. So I'm guessing that Crystal found out that Jason didn't exactly plan for her to be dumped the next day? Cooper seems like an **, honestly... why did Crystal blame it all on Jason though? Cooper was the one who went off to someone else and went along with the plan or whatever...

Their parents are all crazy. Talk about coincidences. Anyways I don't have much to say, but it's sad that Richard got left in the end. Crystal's mom seemed pretty insensitive about the whole thing too...

Anyways, cute story. Might check out some of your others as well. :)

-- Alyssa

OMG, that's so sweet!
It's a cliched story, which is awesome!
Thanks so much!

See my first review. I liked your story, by the way.

I don't know... I was kinda getting used to the whole concept of the story.

P.S. I broke the chair while reading your story. Ops. hehe

Love hurts. I've never been in love, but it sounds like it's worth the pain.

A sweet, heart-pounding romantic-comedy...

AW! They're so cute. It reminds me of my wish to go back in time to when my parents went on a field trip in sixth grade and ended up having their first arguement (like an old married couple). 'Cept this is way sweeter. So I repeat, AW!

That is so messed up! giggle

It's good. It incorporates that whole "laugh-at-the-main-character-because-his?her-life-sucks" concept while still being one of those stupid cliches that you can't get enough of and maintaining originality.

The Eagles had a concert in 1994 called "When Hell Freezes OVer". The Polar icecaps are melting. Don't you watch the ASPCA commercials? And the only place it hasn't rained is something like Caloma. I think it's in Chile. So, yes, it has rained in the Sahara.

Oh my gosh! He's in love with her!

LOL ;)

Very sweet! They make a cute couple. Good story.

Aw...cliche but amazing story!
xx

i like that this was sweet without being corny :)

Very good fic, i found it while doing a random search on the site... in my head i saw it going one way but then i was surprised by the turns it really took. im a sucker for love stories what can i say. anywho GREAT JOB! stay safe

Great story!!

i loved it! it was so cute and i think it worked out perfectly in the end. =)

great job! and fab work! yay! lol

~RL~