This was a very good story and for a one shot it was very developed about the personalities and descriptions of the characters. It was nice, good job.

-Anieca

Aw..so cute!

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prom night. i will alwyas hate it :] wellmy middleschool prom was somewhat fun. but i'm still waiting for my highschool prom ^_~ nice story tho :D

~Nai

So cute!

Totally cute!

Aww, how cute! I think you did a great job - good short stories are hard to do. I need to write character development, shady pasts...I can't do short stories well at all. This, on the other hand, was very sweet, touching, and developed. Great work. Keep writing!

A great story. My junior prom is next week and i have no date. I feel exactly like her yet I didn't let it get the best of me. I am going, alone, with some girls. hopefully i can make the best of it.

Hey Kayli... that was sweet! I loved it!

It's cute! :)

I thought that was cute! It was kind of refreshing!

aww that was short and sweet. i loved it

Quite good for a short story. The idea was well thought out as well as developed.
P.S.
I have the same problem with short stories.

aw that was so cute! ^-^ E heh lol yea...I LOVED that nice story!
DreamNightmare

Aww, that's sweet. I liked it.

amazing story so far, i hope you update soon!