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| Shinigami Hachi 2007-09-15 ch 1,  | abuseprom night. i will alwyas hate it :] wellmy middleschool prom was somewhat fun. but i'm still waiting for my highschool prom ^_~ nice story tho :D ~Nai |
| sakura 2007-03-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo cute! |
| ccaltuna13 2007-01-24 ch 1, | abuseTotally cute! |
| kaika switched 2004-06-11 ch 1, | abuseAww, how cute! I think you did a great job - good short stories are hard to do. I need to write character development, shady pasts...I can't do short stories well at all. This, on the other hand, was very sweet, touching, and developed. Great work. Keep writing! |
| Elyse 2004-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseA great story. My junior prom is next week and i have no date. I feel exactly like her yet I didn't let it get the best of me. I am going, alone, with some girls. hopefully i can make the best of it. |
| Jen 2004-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey Kayli... that was sweet! I loved it! |
| Diane 2004-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's cute! :) |
| pawprintsaly000 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuseI thought that was cute! It was kind of refreshing! |
| anonymous 2004-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww that was short and sweet. i loved it |
| Charlie 2004-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseQuite good for a short story. The idea was well thought out as well as developed. P.S. I have the same problem with short stories. |
| DreamNightmare 2004-04-07 ch 1, | abuseaw that was so cute! ^-^ E heh lol yea...I LOVED that nice story! DreamNightmare |
| Sober-and-Humorless 2004-04-06 ch 1, | abuseAww, that's sweet. I liked it. |
| Lefty06 2004-04-06 ch 1, | abuseamazing story so far, i hope you update soon! |
| oO LoneAngel Oo 2004-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI think you're a nutter and don't know what you're talking about. This story...was very good. But being a fellow writer, is it bad that it's sparking ideas for aditional story line? (Keep in mind me wonderful short story Sunest at Midnight which became the best story I ever wrote...) But yeah...enough babbling...it's good hun! :-) |
| sweet-angel101 2004-04-06 ch 1, | abuseMy oh my. Don't we all wish we had that type of a romantic relationship with friends? Anyways, I'll save you and you can come and check out any of my stories and I hope you can update this story. It would be an excellant choice to have as a long story and continue it! |