FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Bamboti 2004-06-13 ch 1,  | abusewow. I really like this. it's very deep and thotful. i like the ryhmes too. keep it up CA |
| Caledonia 2004-05-21 ch 1, | abuseI like this very much! really! :)I can never ever write poems. not cut out for it. |
| philoslove 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abuseyes... nowadays, many people don't care about wrenching holes in the "glorious sky". I particularly like the shark part and the hole in the sky part, of course, the end too. The end has a little twist to the poem and a hint of darkness that makes the poem more evoking. Yes, what Man does to the environment is disgusting. (one of the reason's why I eat less from the stupid madam ong's food in school: The styrofoam plates) Good job! |
| caks 2004-04-06 ch 1, | abusecooL! i love the twist in the end caks |