this is just a beautiful poem its reall nice n the way you describe everythin in it is so real

Good imagery and such on the spiderwebs, eerie and semi-disturbing images heh but I like. Good work.
Jenna xx

That was very well written! I'm not sure what else to say about it, but it was very good!

Well, pretty good.
Sometimes a bit...okay, won't say anything. ;)
Actually I like it. The rhym is fantastic!!
Keep on writing.
Hope to read some new stuff soon.
bye