The thing I love about poems like this, and detest at the same time, is that I can't think of anything to say. It's perfect. Love the format (my computer won't let me do any kind of format like this, though I've tried), and the phrases are beautiful.
I need to check my email. . .I put you on Author Alert but I didn't get an alert for this. . .*looks disdainnfully at Yahoo*
-Jessica

Wow. I love the surreal-ness of this poem, it really stands out from others in the genre. And it's concise as well, kind of reminds me of Sylvia Plath's works. This poem contains all of my poetic love and you my admiration. ^_^

Nifty, nifty.. I like the way the poem slants and the words create an image effect. I also think the vocabulary is the highlight of the poem and gives it good description and this line was a good idea "until pigments of skin disperse" good work.
Jenna xx