hi, I really liked this story so far, I hope you continue. You may want to accept anoymous reviews though ^^

Wow. Amazing beginning. You write really well but it's a shame that there isn't any more to the story [I Would've really like to read some more].

Great job! You should become a novelist and write tis story out on paper. This would make an excellant book to read!

I like the very begining. The bits about how he normally wouldn't use God or please introduce Malachi very well.

Hey this i an awesome start! Hope to see more in the future!