I love the concepts you bring up in this, and I liked the slight humour you have in this, with the Lego and a hundred lifeboats with each bottled message. It is quite true, though, that maybe without religion, nobody would care what background we are. The last stanza was excellent; I wonder what frowning like poetry or grimacing like comedy would be like.

Awesome

wow, this... makes me think. i like it... a lot.
umm, yeah, i can't think of anything intelligent to say today, i guess...

I love you, man.
Great concept. It's. . .different, and something I'd think.
Verses are descriptive and lovely. Wish there was more, though. . . :)
-Jessica

hm *taps chin* that's an interesting concept he he he. thanks so much for your kind reviews, it made my night I must say. and by the way, I just wanted to say that I don't like J.R. either, too much LOTR hoopla, it's madness. I'm glad I'm not alone P
Jenna xx