hey wow thats wicked...i'm not very poetic or anything like that but you use some cool imagrey i dono i'm a bad speller thank god for spell cheack lol anyways just letting ya know

i liked it a lot, i have been meaning to write a poem on this kinda thing, anyways excellent.
Please check out my poems and rate too :)

OMG! Nobody reviewed this? This is completely awesome! I don't usually find myself reading/writing poetry, but man...you made me like it so much! I never was good at writing poetry and I don't believe I ever will, but right now...You've got yourself another fan! _
Oh, and it's thanks to Naede that I checked out your poems. _ I'm glad I did too.