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| Disturbing Enigma 2006-02-14 ch 1,   | WOW. I LOVE! This is my new favorite poem. So amazing... I'm exactly like the character in this... WOW. |
| x0myimmortal0x 2006-02-13 ch 1, | This is really good. I can definatley relate to this poem, it's very real and comforting. Although it lacks a bit of detail & vocabulary, it's still a good piece of work. :] |
| Ketchup 2004-08-03 ch 1, | Very nicely done, KC! I think everybody feels like dying at some point or another (I know I do sometimes), so don't feel like you're alone, man! Know that I'll never tell you you're wrong; I love you too much. You have a wonderful way of making me feel better. You're such a warm person, and I think that you need for self-esteem and self-confidence. It's wonderful that you can be you. Don't change for anyone else; change because you WANT to. Love you lots! Talk to you soon! |
| Bandbingo 2004-04-10 ch 1, | i understand how you feel about not being able to tell anyone but God about what you're going through because of what your friends might do or say. i've been going through that too. very nice. i like this one. |
| Samurai Jade 2004-04-09 ch 1, | Wow! this is really good! I hope to see more poems from you in the future! ^_^ |
| Chiinoyami-chan 2004-04-09 ch 1, | Yami? *Tear* Why don't you ever talk to me? I'm supposed to be your best friend.. You know I'll never judge you. You know I'll always be there to listen. I'm sad.. Don't be sad. And DON'T cute. It's impossible to stop! How many times have I told you that? .. But I know that you don't. It's great that you trust God so much, K.. Yami. But could you trust me, too? Please? I love you. And great poem. Keep writing! Chii. |
| MD Jamison 2004-04-07 ch 1, | This poem has a great message, and you show a lot of promise as a poet! This is a great idea, and what you have now is very good, though I think it could be phenominal if you go through it a little and tighten it up a bit by taking out some of the repetative phrasing, like: They don’t understand, but I know that you understand. I'm not a great poet or anything- so this is just my uneducated suggestion. But I do like this poem a lot, and I really look forward to reading more of your work! ^_^ Keep it up and keep writing! |