YES! BRILLIANT!

Armadilloes are EVERYWHERE in Alabama! Nice poem too...

Wow Ann-banan. This is some deep stuff! It's hard to read, it's so emotional, but I know how you feel!
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But we're not losers :).

I like it...a bit. I mean, I find it incredibly crude and horrific, but not for the bad language. I don't really give a damn about that--I swear all the time, noe problem. But only when I have to...anyway. I want to know the message of this poem. I can't find it anywhere. Are you sure you weren't drugged when you wrote this one? You spelled the name MERCUTIO and ATHIAST incorrectly. Trust me--I'm an athiast myself, and I just finished Shakespeare's epic novel, Romeo and Juliet.
As long as you keep writing, however, you'll get better, and I will continue to review.