lol Punkie what a great idea! Writing from the perspective of a 66-year-old-man. You're so creative. Can't wait to read the rest.

Thats pretty damn good. I really like the narrative, kind've reminds me of my writing. Just thought you could give a little description on how Sunny looks though. All in all the narration I loved and I think it can become a pretty damn good story. Keep at it.