i think this should be under the humor section instead of the horror section

hey! i just wanted to comment :D

the last time i read this was in 2004 o_o i was kind of hoping that you would've updated or something _; i do hope you update soon!

Very interesting. Keep up the good work. :-)

ta1nt3d1uv,Thankyou doesn't have to be two words, it can in fact be "thankyou". But thanks for your review :) I hope you keep reading, it's stopped for a bit, but I'm just starting on the next _Melisande

"The attacker pulled out a pocked knife and flicked it open. "I'm gonna spill your guts, loser," he snarled and then he plunged the knife into the boy's neck." pocket*

"A few seconds later a box opened that said, 'Your review has been submitted. Thankyou.'" Missed the space between thank and you

Good so far. Now onto the next chapter. :-)

I really enjoyed this. Vry original and not at all cliche. I love the way you write but I do agree with MorbidMan on the dialouge. I congragulate you though as I couldn't write better. *adds to favorite stories lists.* This still has potential and I am a sucker for good writing and a creepy horror fic. :P

Good job. You had me believing it could happen. O.O; Update soon ! XD

* Noelle *

just out of curiosity...are you wiccan? and didn't you have a MSN group? i'm just curious...

love your story...-anonymous

yo that was nice! _

O.O Dam I was thinking this could happen to me. -_- You're scaring me. O.o ::hides under bed::

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AH the bogey man ! ::dies of shock:: X.x ::It was actually a barney video.:: X.x'

Please update. This is still really good ! Please ? ::glossy eyed::

noelle

gr8 job

FREAK! That was so scary. i dont know maybe I am too emotional, but wow! I hav never tried writing horror.

There is absouloutly nothing wrong with this chapter!

Emma's reactions were sortof messed up in this chapter. One seond she's comforting Minnie. The next she's swearing at her and then she's comforting again.

ANother great chapter!

BUM, BUM,BUMM!