Hi,I love this story, and I'm really sorry about ModernMagic on Avidgamers, I hope that the site comes back into gear.I'm the newbie on the site you approved me about a week ago. So I'm just here.:)Have you thought about doing another advertisement on AG??

Yes! Awesomeness! I love it! ...This coming from someone who read half of the story at least two months before the other half, and I still thought it was awesome. That just goes to show you something about this story. I want it. *stares at the story and contemplates printing it out, binding it, and using it as a pillow* ^^ Totally awesome plot, great character development, love the baddie - he's really, really bad, without being bad enough to be not human. Good balance in the characters - Liz has a great, realistic character that I admire. Couldn't sing more praise for this story. Well, maybe I could, but I don't know those bardic songs yet... *grin* Anyway, you've given this story a nice touch. ^^ Doubt that many people could have done half as well. I could also give some constructive critisism, if I wasn't so lazy, I suppose, but... well, if you really want it, you can email me, neh? ^^ Thanks for writing!

I loved the story!...wow...very interesting!

Dude, those bastards better not hurt her...
This is pretty kewl! Good job

interesting! I want to read more...plz continue