|Reviews for Shame|
| Steel Winged Angel 8/29/04 . chapter 1
"Only after it is gone forever, do we see what he have lost, or what be might have had, true pain comes do those who understand what they have lost..." Very true words. You really capture how you see life as well as what life really is.
| Deirdra Chaeli 8/27/04 . chapter 1
Short, sad, and powerful. You will never cease to amaze me with your work. It is such a joy to read the stunning images infused with emotion that you have written... thank you. From someone who knows the feeling all too well, thank you for doing it absolute justice. Bravo.
| pneumothorax 5/25/04 . chapter 1
The mirror part sounded almost cliched but other than that I thought it was very good, dramatic. The last line was .. unexpected. I don't see alot of guy's poetry on this site ... maybe I just don't get around enough (the site..) but it seemed deeper because it was self scruitiny. It wouldn't have been the same if it was female-authored. Good. (r&r back?)
| Cry Tears of Darkness 4/28/04 . chapter 1
heh! nice nice!
| Aki Akito 4/21/04 . chapter 1
Awesome...that's all I can say...
| Breaking Heart 4/21/04 . chapter 1
really great(good seemed beneath you)
thanx for pointin' me in your direction.
your irish lover
| originality is dead 4/12/04 . chapter 1
wow...amazing... love it!
-till the end-
| lalamushu 4/7/04 . chapter 1
my apologies that things didn't turn out that well w/ your friend. hopefully things will get better soon. _ good poem